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15 Roses
By: Valentine Llanos

Story of a father of a 15-year-old girl that gets kill on her 15th birthday by a prominent judge on a accident. John, her dad will kill the judge and spend 20 years in jail before becoming a serial killer of young girls.
 

15 Roses

By: Valentine Llanos Rodriguez

Fade in:

As the credits are shown on the screen we see a 20-years old women in labor having hers and her husband first and only child. The hospital room darker than normal appears very tense as she screams in severe pain. Elizabeth, the woman is a white female with black hair up to her shoulders. Black eyes and a beautiful face are adjectives that made John to fall in love with her.

The camera moves around the room as we see the entire room and medical personnel that is attending Elizabeth, there is 4 people in the room besides her. Now as the camera moves towards her bed she screams very loud again. This is a sign of the baby been ready to come out. Above the head of her bed we see a calendar that has the date of July 22nd 1967.

Doctor

Ok guys this is it, lets get ready to work

Assistance

Yes sir, ok nurse let her know that is time now

Nurse

Ok

She clears her throat

Nurse

Ok girl we ready to go. Every time that you get pain I need you to push, not with you mouth but with the bottom part of you body. Just like when you take a dump ok

Elizabeth

You got that right; I am ready to dump this baby now

She did not finish saying baby were she gets the pain again and screams from the top of her lungs

Nurse

Come on girl; give me a good push

She is pushing while she is breathing heavily from her mouth

Nurse

Good girl, I can see the head alreadycome on push, push, push it is coming

Nurse cleans her face as the other nurse cleans Elizabeths

Nurse

Ok doc is coming

Doctor

Thank you let me get in there

He gets closer to her bed and starts to work

Doctor

Give me the water

Assistance

They you go sir

Doctor

Thanks

He pulls the baby out as Elizabeth pushes and breath while still screaming

The nurse grabs the baby girl and wraps her on a towel and walks towards the glass wall were John, the father is waiting to see her. The nurse will get the baby and place it very close to the glass so her dad can almost touch her.

John, who is 20 also places his finger on the glass as the baby cries and he also does of happiness

The camera moves from the glass as we here a click sound

Screen goes empty like when there is nothing on TV

Cut to:

Interior-Johns House-15 years Later-Morning

In the living room we see Rose sitting right in front of the TV as John, her dad gets up from the couch and walks towards the VCR to remove the tape

Elizabeth

So what do you think?

Rose

That little thing is me?

John

In the flesh

Rose

That looks like did hurt a lot mom

Elizabeth

In did Rose but I did it for you and eventually you will do it for you kids

John

Hold up she does not have time for that now, just school. You got that?

Rose

Yes dad. Dont worry I have no plans for that yet

John

Good girl

Elizabeth

Ok Rose lets get you ready. Today is your day

They get up and walk towards Rose room to get her ready for her 15th birthday festivities

John sits and looks at a picture of Rose on the wall next to the calendar with the date of July 22nd 1982.

John

I can believe she is already 15th

The camera moves and focuses up were a ceiling fan is

Cut to:

Interior-Church-Afternoon-Later

Camera is focusing of a ceiling fan and then goes down were the priest is finishing the mass that was dedicated to Rose

Priest

You may go in peace

Crowd

We give thanks to the lord

The crowd gets up and commences to leave the church

Cut to:

Exterior-Church-Later

As we see John and Elizabeth talking with the Priest and others

Rose

Im going to wait in the car dad

She kisses John and Elizabeth before putting her headphones on

Rose

Come on mom

Elizabeth

We will be there in a second honey

Cut to:

Exterior-Highway-Continuos

A vehicle at a very fast speed is traveling towards the direction were the church is

Inside is Judge Clark is not doing well. He has a reaction to his medication and is swerving and moving all over the road as he approaches the church area were now we see the whole scene.

John reacts as he heard the vehicle noises as Rose is opening the car door

As the Judge vehicle gets closer and closer to Roses car John walks towards that same are

Finally the Judge floors his car obviously because the medication straight towards Rose

John runs towards Rose, as it is imminent that the Judge is going to hit her

John (screaming)

Rose, look out

Elizabeth notice was going on too

Elizabeth (screaming)

Rose, John, stop the car

Everyone notices now as finally Rose looks and sees the vehicle but is too late now

The Judge hits the car by the door launching Rose over the car and landing by the grass in front of the church

John (screaming)

No

He runs to aid Rose as the Judge gets out of the vehicle and the Priest helps him

Elizabeth passed out

As Rose lies on the ground

John

Rose, wake up girl. Please dont leave us know

He puts his head down and cries as he cheeks Roses pulse

John (screaming)

No

He looks up and sees his wife also on the ground been help by the paramedics that just arrive and also the police which is talking with Judge Clark.

The Priest comes to were John is

Priest

How is she?

John (crying)

My girl is dead father, she is dead

John gets up and star walking towards his wife and seconds later hes there

John

How she is doing

Paramedic

She is ok. She just passed out

John looks around and once again sees the Judge talking with the police

John

You motherfucker

John runs towards the Judge

Paramedic

Sir, sir stop right now

A police office notices that John is coming and stops him

Police

Were you going sir?

John

This motherfucker just kill my little girl

Police

Sir this is Judge Clark and looks like it was just an accident.

John

Accident

Police

He had a reaction to his heart medication

John

I dont care my girl is dead and Im going to kill him, let me go

Detective Long

Let him gocome with me sir

John

Who are you?

Detective Long

My name is Detective Long and Im in charge off this investigation. For what I seen so far he did not saw you girl because the medication. I know that this is not going to make it better for you or will bring you daughter back but that is what we have for now. Stay here and I get back and let you know if I have anything else ok

John

Yes sir

His facial expression now has change like nothing has happened, as the Judge is place inside a police car and his wife on an ambulance

Paramedic

Sir are you ok

John gets up and leaves

The camera moves towards the ambulance were Rose is as it leave while we see inside Rose.

Back at the accident area

Detective Long

Sir, sir, excuse me sir

A taxicab has come to the area and is now turning around because the road is block.

John signals the taxi driver

John (yelling)

Heystop

Cab stops

John gets on a taxi and takes off as the camera follows the taxi to the next traffic light

The camera moves back towards the accident area and focuses on Detective Long

Detective Long

What a crazy situation. One dead girl, a sick judge and may be a crazy dad.

The police officer approaches the detective

Police

Dont forget about the mom

Detective Long

Oh yeahhow is she

Police

She is ok but you never know on these cases

Detective Long

You got that right. We all hope everything will be fine

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