Pay Back
By: Valentine Llanos
Fade in
As the weeding music is playing the credits for the movie are shown. At the same time the viewers will also see several scenes from the pre-ceremony, ceremony and after the ceremony.
First scene is a short view of the weeding dress as it lies on top of the bed. A gorgeous white dress with white and pink flowers as well as see through parts on the back and the chest area.
Second scene allows us to see the bride as she is getting her make-up and others things to be ready for her day.
Third scene shows the groom as he waits for his future wife at the altar inside the church.
Fourth scene is were we seeing the bride walking towards the groom as he smiles and impatient waits for her.
Fifth scene the couple is now coming out of the church as their friend and families are smiling, clapping, taking pictures at them and tossing rice as well.
Sixth scene is at the hotel, there honeymoon. As the camera enters the suite throughout the close door the weeding music stops and we hear a very low moaning coming from the bedroom. Now inside the room we hear a louder moan as Jennifer, a blonde white female it is moving up and down on top of Shawn a black man, while they make love.
The camera moves from the room throughout the window as it gets dark and then lighter to show the viewers that time has elapsed.
Cut to:
Exterior somewhere on the highway morning
A pack of white birds is flying west as the sun comes up while the camera takes the focus from it and follows a black Ford Expedition 2002. Off course, inside Jennifer and Shawn newly weeds are traveling back from their honeymoon towards their new home in Oklahoma.
Cut to:
Exterior of a gas station moments later
The Expedition just pulls in into the gas station. Jennifer gets out to use the bathroom while Shawn fills up the truck.
Jennifer wears a very short red skirt, a white basketball plain jersey with a white bra under and black sandal.
A bell rings as Jennifer opens the door of the store. As she walks the camera focus on her beautiful long legs.
Camera moves up as she gets to the clerk, him being a white male. He is about 20 years old with black hair, wearing a Dallas Cowboys hat, white shirt and black jeans.
Jennifer
Excuse sir, do you have a bathroom please?
Rick the store clerk smiles, as he looks towards the far back of the store were his friends are.
Rick
The key is by the door down the hall on the lefty
Jennifer
Thank you honey
She turns to the lefty and goes towards the bathroom
Rick grabs his crotch
Rick
(With a very low voice)
I got you honey bitch
As Jennifer walks she noticed the other 3 guys out back in the store. She gets the key, opens the door and gets inside.
She seats on the toilet as she flushes it and gets up. We can see her body naked from the waist down including all the toilet paper stuck on her ass that she used to seat on and protect her from germs.
Outside the door one of the guys Billy is sweeping the floor by the bathroom as she gets out of it
Billy
Hi, how are you doing gorgeous?
Jennifer is caught by surprise and drops the key on the floor
Billy
I am sorry lady; I will get that for you
Jennifer
Oh! Dont worry I got it
As she bends to pick-up the key Billy looks to see her ass
She noticed and rapidly gets up, puts the key in place and gets out to the car
Cut to:
Outside by the car moments later
Shawn just finished with the gas as she comes kind of nervous
Shawn
What is it baby?
Jennifer
Oh! It is nothing I am just worn out
They hug and kiss very passionate as the four guys look from the store (Rick, Billy, Mark and Robert)
Shawn
Thats what you get tempting like that
Jennifer
Oh! Dont worry, you will see what I got for tonight
Shawn
Ok let me pay so we can get started
Jennifer
Let me go and pay and you start the car baby
Shawn
Ill tell you what get in the car and Ill be right back
Jennifer
Ok, hurry please
He walks towards the store as he sees the four white guys.
Shawn shakes his head as he turns to Jennifer to let her know that everything is ok
Cut to:
Inside the store continuos
As Shawn approaches Rick up front to pay for two drinks and a bag of potato chips Billy comes from behind and bumps him.
Billy
Oh! Shit I am sorry man
Shawn
No problem kid
Billy
Kid who in the hell you call kid?
Complete silence
Shawn
Im sorry man; I did not mean anything wrong by saying that
Billy
Damn right motherfucker
Mark and Robert come from the back of the store
Mark
Come on guys, not again
Billy
Shut the fuck up you punk
Shawn
Hold on you guys I dont want any problems but you dont need to call me a motherfucker
Robert
Oh! I guess he prefers to be call-fucking NIGER
Shawn turns towards Robert as he drops the drinks and chips. It gets very quiet until the stuff hits the ground when we hear a very loud bang.
Shawn
What the fuck you said motherfucker?
Rick grabs a baseball, throws it and hits Shawn on the head
He drops down on the ground but still conscious
Robert
Lock the fucking door Rick
Billy
Yeah, lets kick his ass
Mark
What we are going to do with the babe?
Rick
I am going to fuck her brains out
Robert
I got second
Mark
I cant believe you guys
Billy
I guess Ill be last
Rick
You guys make me sick
They all laugh out loud as Shawn attempts to sit-up while we hear a loud sound when the door is lock.
Shawn
Please live my wife alone. I give anything but please do not touch her please
Robert
Sure NIGER
Rick
Yes master
They all look to each other as they abruptly attack Shawn by kicking, spitting, insulting, etc
All this time the camera only showed the guys
Now the camera moves towards the door as it gets unlocked while the guys run to back of the store
Jennifer gets out of the truck and walk to the store. Now inside
Jennifer
Hello, hello, anybody here Shawn are you here? This is not funny dammed
She looks to the front were the clerk was before and no one is there. She slips and when she looks down she notice the blood on the floor.
Jennifer
Oh! Shit what the hell happened?
She starts to cry and gets very nervous
Jennifer
Shawn this is not fucking funny
Rick
Oh yes it is baby and as a matter a fact we are going to do a lot of that
Jennifer
What are you talking about?
Rick
I am talking about a lot of fucking bitch
She scream very loud as Rick jumps out from behind the counter
Jennifer
Were my husband, were is Shawn?
Rick
Well look up and you see
The camera moves as she looks up to the ceiling.
The door opens with a very squeaky sound
Very loud at the end
Robert
Surprise bitch, damn she is fine
Jennifer
Were is Shawn
Robert
Well guys she ask for Shawn and there he is
Camera focuses on Rick for a moment and then to Jennifer
Now the camera follows the eyes of Jennifer as she looks back up to the top
As the Mark, Robert and Billy stand on top they hold a body like load wrap on a white sheet with red spots (blood)
Billy
Hey bitch
It gets very quiet
Billy (continuation)
Here is you fucking NIGER
They drop him like a piece of garbage
As he falls on slow motion we see Jennifer also running towards him
He hits the floor with his left shoulder
Very loud bang
Motion come back to normal as she gets to him. She removes the sheet and goes crazy crying for him
For the first time we see Shawn after the beating that he toke by the four guys. He is still conscious
Shawn
Jennifer you have to get out of here, they will hurt you and there is nothing I can do to help you. I think my legs are broke as well as my left arm a shoulder
Jennifer
I wont leave you here like this
Shawn
Listen to me get out, Ill be fine
She kiss him on his bloody mouth and runs to the door
Door is look so she looks around for something and finally sees a bubble gum machine that she picks and launches to the glass door chattering it
Loud noise
Inside the back of the store
Rick
What the fuck
Billy gets up and runs to the front were he see the broken door and Jennifer getting on the truck
Billy
You guys I think we have a problem
They all come to the front as Jennifer takes off
Robert
Well now what?
Rick
Well lets finish this NIGER and lets go and get the bitch
They all run to the door
Mark
We forgot about dude
Robert
Ill tell you what, you guys go ahead and I will kill this piece of black shit
They all agree
Robert
Well, well, well we are finally alone. You just dont know how much I hate all of you motherfucker man. Hell better yet is not because you are black it is just that if you look in Football what do you see blacks dominates, Basketball blacks dominates, Baseball blacks dominates, Boxing blacks dominates. Shit even Golf now you motherfuckers rule.
He laughs out loud
Robert
I guess you are in pain right. That is nothing
He moves face to face to Shawn
Robert
Next thing will be that you NIGERS will rule Hockey or be the first black fucking president
He spit on Shawns face and laugh
Robert
Well it was a pleasure to meeting you
Robert gets a glass bottle of oil and smacks Shawn in the face braking his nose and jaw.
Next with the broken bottle Robert hits Shawn several times like crazy as the blood splashes to his face
Shawn is shaking and twisting on the ground as Robert pick him up
Roberts
Stan still NIGER
