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Pay Back
By: Valentine Llanos

A couple is attack by a group of guys raping and killing the girl, leaving the guy for dead, who will come back months later with the help of two female friends from school to pay back those that destroy his life.
 

Pay Back

By: Valentine Llanos

Fade in

As the weeding music is playing the credits for the movie are shown. At the same time the viewers will also see several scenes from the pre-ceremony, ceremony and after the ceremony.

First scene is a short view of the weeding dress as it lies on top of the bed. A gorgeous white dress with white and pink flowers as well as see through parts on the back and the chest area.

Second scene allows us to see the bride as she is getting her make-up and others things to be ready for her day.

Third scene shows the groom as he waits for his future wife at the altar inside the church.

Fourth scene is were we seeing the bride walking towards the groom as he smiles and impatient waits for her.

Fifth scene the couple is now coming out of the church as their friend and families are smiling, clapping, taking pictures at them and tossing rice as well.

Sixth scene is at the hotel, there honeymoon. As the camera enters the suite throughout the close door the weeding music stops and we hear a very low moaning coming from the bedroom. Now inside the room we hear a louder moan as Jennifer, a blonde white female it is moving up and down on top of Shawn a black man, while they make love.

The camera moves from the room throughout the window as it gets dark and then lighter to show the viewers that time has elapsed.

Cut to:

Exterior somewhere on the highway morning

A pack of white birds is flying west as the sun comes up while the camera takes the focus from it and follows a black Ford Expedition 2002. Off course, inside Jennifer and Shawn newly weeds are traveling back from their honeymoon towards their new home in Oklahoma.

Cut to:

Exterior of a gas station moments later

The Expedition just pulls in into the gas station. Jennifer gets out to use the bathroom while Shawn fills up the truck.

Jennifer wears a very short red skirt, a white basketball plain jersey with a white bra under and black sandal.

A bell rings as Jennifer opens the door of the store. As she walks the camera focus on her beautiful long legs.

Camera moves up as she gets to the clerk, him being a white male. He is about 20 years old with black hair, wearing a Dallas Cowboys hat, white shirt and black jeans.

Jennifer

Excuse sir, do you have a bathroom please?

Rick the store clerk smiles, as he looks towards the far back of the store were his friends are.

Rick

The key is by the door down the hall on the lefty

Jennifer

Thank you honey

She turns to the lefty and goes towards the bathroom

Rick grabs his crotch

Rick

(With a very low voice)

I got you honey bitch

As Jennifer walks she noticed the other 3 guys out back in the store. She gets the key, opens the door and gets inside.

She seats on the toilet as she flushes it and gets up. We can see her body naked from the waist down including all the toilet paper stuck on her ass that she used to seat on and protect her from germs.

Outside the door one of the guys Billy is sweeping the floor by the bathroom as she gets out of it

Billy

Hi, how are you doing gorgeous?

Jennifer is caught by surprise and drops the key on the floor

Billy

I am sorry lady; I will get that for you

Jennifer

Oh! Dont worry I got it

As she bends to pick-up the key Billy looks to see her ass

She noticed and rapidly gets up, puts the key in place and gets out to the car

Cut to:

Outside by the car moments later

Shawn just finished with the gas as she comes kind of nervous

Shawn

What is it baby?

Jennifer

Oh! It is nothing I am just worn out

They hug and kiss very passionate as the four guys look from the store (Rick, Billy, Mark and Robert)

Shawn

Thats what you get tempting like that

Jennifer

Oh! Dont worry, you will see what I got for tonight

Shawn

Ok let me pay so we can get started

Jennifer

Let me go and pay and you start the car baby

Shawn

Ill tell you what get in the car and Ill be right back

Jennifer

Ok, hurry please

He walks towards the store as he sees the four white guys.

Shawn shakes his head as he turns to Jennifer to let her know that everything is ok

Cut to:

Inside the store continuos

As Shawn approaches Rick up front to pay for two drinks and a bag of potato chips Billy comes from behind and bumps him.

Billy

Oh! Shit I am sorry man

Shawn

No problem kid

Billy

Kid who in the hell you call kid?

Complete silence

Shawn

Im sorry man; I did not mean anything wrong by saying that

Billy

Damn right motherfucker

Mark and Robert come from the back of the store

Mark

Come on guys, not again

Billy

Shut the fuck up you punk

Shawn

Hold on you guys I dont want any problems but you dont need to call me a motherfucker

Robert

Oh! I guess he prefers to be call-fucking NIGER

Shawn turns towards Robert as he drops the drinks and chips. It gets very quiet until the stuff hits the ground when we hear a very loud bang.

Shawn

What the fuck you said motherfucker?

Rick grabs a baseball, throws it and hits Shawn on the head

He drops down on the ground but still conscious

Robert

Lock the fucking door Rick

Billy

Yeah, lets kick his ass

Mark

What we are going to do with the babe?

Rick

I am going to fuck her brains out

Robert

I got second

Mark

I cant believe you guys

Billy

I guess Ill be last

Rick

You guys make me sick

They all laugh out loud as Shawn attempts to sit-up while we hear a loud sound when the door is lock.

Shawn

Please live my wife alone. I give anything but please do not touch her please

Robert

Sure NIGER

Rick

Yes master

They all look to each other as they abruptly attack Shawn by kicking, spitting, insulting, etc

All this time the camera only showed the guys

Now the camera moves towards the door as it gets unlocked while the guys run to back of the store

Jennifer gets out of the truck and walk to the store. Now inside

Jennifer

Hello, hello, anybody here Shawn are you here? This is not funny dammed

She looks to the front were the clerk was before and no one is there. She slips and when she looks down she notice the blood on the floor.

Jennifer

Oh! Shit what the hell happened?

She starts to cry and gets very nervous

Jennifer

Shawn this is not fucking funny

Rick

Oh yes it is baby and as a matter a fact we are going to do a lot of that

Jennifer

What are you talking about?

Rick

I am talking about a lot of fucking bitch

She scream very loud as Rick jumps out from behind the counter

Jennifer

Were my husband, were is Shawn?

Rick

Well look up and you see

The camera moves as she looks up to the ceiling.

The door opens with a very squeaky sound

Very loud at the end

Robert

Surprise bitch, damn she is fine

Jennifer

Were is Shawn

Robert

Well guys she ask for Shawn and there he is

Camera focuses on Rick for a moment and then to Jennifer

Now the camera follows the eyes of Jennifer as she looks back up to the top

As the Mark, Robert and Billy stand on top they hold a body like load wrap on a white sheet with red spots (blood)

Billy

Hey bitch

It gets very quiet

Billy (continuation)

Here is you fucking NIGER

They drop him like a piece of garbage

As he falls on slow motion we see Jennifer also running towards him

He hits the floor with his left shoulder

Very loud bang

Motion come back to normal as she gets to him. She removes the sheet and goes crazy crying for him

 

For the first time we see Shawn after the beating that he toke by the four guys. He is still conscious

Shawn

Jennifer you have to get out of here, they will hurt you and there is nothing I can do to help you. I think my legs are broke as well as my left arm a shoulder

Jennifer

I wont leave you here like this

Shawn

Listen to me get out, Ill be fine

She kiss him on his bloody mouth and runs to the door

Door is look so she looks around for something and finally sees a bubble gum machine that she picks and launches to the glass door chattering it

Loud noise

Inside the back of the store

Rick

What the fuck

Billy gets up and runs to the front were he see the broken door and Jennifer getting on the truck

Billy

You guys I think we have a problem

They all come to the front as Jennifer takes off

 

 

Robert

Well now what?

Rick

Well lets finish this NIGER and lets go and get the bitch

They all run to the door

Mark

We forgot about dude

Robert

Ill tell you what, you guys go ahead and I will kill this piece of black shit

They all agree

Robert

Well, well, well we are finally alone. You just dont know how much I hate all of you motherfucker man. Hell better yet is not because you are black it is just that if you look in Football what do you see blacks dominates, Basketball blacks dominates, Baseball blacks dominates, Boxing blacks dominates. Shit even Golf now you motherfuckers rule.

He laughs out loud

Robert

I guess you are in pain right. That is nothing

He moves face to face to Shawn

Robert

Next thing will be that you NIGERS will rule Hockey or be the first black fucking president

He spit on Shawns face and laugh

Robert

Well it was a pleasure to meeting you

Robert gets a glass bottle of oil and smacks Shawn in the face braking his nose and jaw.

Next with the broken bottle Robert hits Shawn several times like crazy as the blood splashes to his face

Shawn is shaking and twisting on the ground as Robert pick him up

Roberts

Stan still NIGER

Action